LikeTheWolf Posted August 18, 2008 Share Posted August 18, 2008 i saw her wearing red summer dress her black hair contrasted well a few more wrinkles same old voice not very much else to tell but there would be if feelings could be put into words what a lost opportunity she was ltw Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 hair is always glossier on the other side of the fence red and black and lost to you are your only defense wrinkles emote twinkling eyes you've lost then found fresh as newborn wishes on fertile virgin ground Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 the past is dead it's gone to bed I'd rather fill my empty head with fantasies of what's to come what is done can't be twice the second time would be a bore and not so nice as it was before Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 the girl in red the hair in black i saw her just two days ago she said something about an email or keeping contact my mind becomes such a blur but i did say would you like me to email you and she said yes and i thought i had it but i didn't maybe its for the best so i didn't try to locate the address but that's a lie, i did stupid red dress she is short little with a red dress now who does that sound like? and who am i? fate is funny but i'm not laughing ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 how odd i saw you in the pool ignoring you (except under the water where you couldn't see) never exchanged a word or glance how odd that after i left and waiting for my friend that you come out and introduce yourself and shake my hand and give me your name how odd i had my ring which i never wear except for today i had it displayed proudly yet i still felt your vibe felt quite good -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 whenever things finally feel right when things feel like they are going good your mistake comes up and it crashes my heart positive thinking was working and i was back to praying again your aftermath rears its ugly head and i'm back to where i'm started where is the justice? -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 there is man in white holding a case inside that box has been mystery to us and him until the dark skinned man payed attention the next time he opened it (he had to shoot out his third eye to see it) six items, made him scream the revolver the scope the knives the blindfold the lock pick the mask they are all him though he watched himself swallow the gun and pull the trigger he did not do it oh the guilt -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 24, 2008 Share Posted August 24, 2008 seeing is one thing believing, a second reinvent the ghoul that stalks bright day give it a new name clothe it in rays of lucid white but when you're asleep in it will seep tarry and black through seams and cracks through your mind's ancient hull worm it's furtive way cloaked in midnight Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 24, 2008 Share Posted August 24, 2008 there is a box I want to open it is not mine I have no right to see within curiosity will kill this cat but I have a few more lives before I need to deal with that this is now my mind will scratch claws wandering through the thick and thin of him Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 25, 2008 Share Posted August 25, 2008 infrequently there are times I raise my eyes shift my gaze from inside I look upon hearth and bed my cozy corner of mother earth all I love safe within with a cynical grin I think (that I think) "I'm so lucky, I'm so lucky" so what keeps twisting me inside out and back again? Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 27, 2008 Share Posted August 27, 2008 the moon is full it fills my head makes me crazy lights up my bed I don't fear her we're the same my lunar sighs light liquid pain she's coming soon gift in the dark signs of life deep crimson mark Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 You get your own pain and struggle to work it out when you can barely take any more when all you can do is shout when you can't sleep at night and wake up sweating when you do when your soul has been crushed like ripe grapes and that person in the mirror is not you when you think you can't go on and struggle to keep you own blood inside when you want rip your hair out and scream to turn the tides one thing will makes it all go away one thing will push you upright,give you a shove one thing will make you pain seem so little the one thing is when suffering happens to someone you ____ -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
Touche Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 OMG, I hate poetry It makes me want to scream! It makes me want to twist myself up into a knot and turn myself into a pretzel It's agonizing It's annoying It's pretentious It's contentious Can't people just say what they mean And vent their spleen Without stanzas And all the extravaganzas? I really hate poetry. It's my birthday tomorrow Should I get drunk? Am I getting old? It's a wet and breezy night. Feel the rain There's a man holding a case Full of champagne He has a mask on He's waiting for me to come He said it could cost me though But first I have to jump in the pool My stomach is turning sour. My mind is scratchy The past is dead Do I have a future? How odd that when you came out of the pool You noticed that I was married. I forgot to take my ring off Ooops! My soul has been crushed like an old can of Bud that you drank in 3 gulps one thing will make it all go away i just don't know yet what that one thing is the moon is full please don't shift your gaze while I reveal my true felelings and tell you that your poetry sucks Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 make your accusations while they are not true i gave my confessions and made my case my poetry is bad yes i know but it is mine and mine alone no one argues no one complains the threads are yours for you to post i choose to reside myself here where i am safe and at peace and free Link to post Share on other sites
Touche Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 Some people are so retarded They're best discarded Bad poetry sucks Just like lame ducks Everyone argues Everyone kvetches It's my birthday It's my birthday Enjoy your basement Gaze at the moon if you have a window Stop having thoughts you shouldn't be thinkin' Stinkin' thinkin' is no good Enjoy your neighborhood Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 I chatted with a girl online and she looked so fine she could never be mine but i refuse to wine because she's special.... i mean she looks so good like a hot woman should she always gives me wood i did all i could because she's special... i don't see her any more i hurts me to the core i had so much more in store my heart will no longer soar she was pretty special... -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 the hunt is on i am on the prowl you won't hear me coming not a noise or growl you can attack me try me all you want but when you attack a friend it is you then i will haunt i will track you down and find out what was said i heard some vile things were posted that were both seen and read the mare inflicted has too much class to stoop to your level, so low in her name i'll be your villain and make sure its time for you to go you can ruin my name and rep its been over for me anyway but touch anyone in my past i'll attack without delay and when it's done i'll expect no redemption it's for others to decide i'm sure i'll still be shunned no bullying will tolerated for now, i will be direct this was not taken lightly so this is my new project -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 29, 2008 Share Posted August 29, 2008 Some people are so retarded They're best discarded Bad poetry sucks Just like lame ducks Everyone argues Everyone kvetches It's my birthday It's my birthday Enjoy your basement Gaze at the moon if you have a window Stop having thoughts you shouldn't be thinkin' Stinkin' thinkin' is no good Enjoy your neighborhood your poetry is ironic since you hate it yet write it you came here to bitch lash at us with a switch of lame, limp wood I bet, if you could you'd write potent words set the world ablaze but ducks don't write they just paddle away Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 29, 2008 Share Posted August 29, 2008 Touche is good people she is a friend she should never change she truths, rather than pretend my beef is with another whom i yet not know hurt someone close to me i knew not so long ago i have yet to find the words left by one so rude but when i find out who it was they will taste what has been stewed. -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 29, 2008 Share Posted August 29, 2008 I take back my couplets there were written in ignorance of dark shifty dealings there goes my innocence once again Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted August 29, 2008 Share Posted August 29, 2008 no harm done! it was not your mistake, but mine but remember what was always said to err human, but to forgive, divine -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted August 29, 2008 Share Posted August 29, 2008 I save forgiveness (of which I've little) for those who have proved their mettle since you are a mystery still I'll take my leave sharpen my quill Link to post Share on other sites
ed-205 Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 The Tinman walks upon the earth, unspoiled by sadness, yet devoid of mirth. Where he goes, he reckons not, the plans once made are long forgot, with nothing left but tasks to tend, until the path he walks will end. So, on he labors unperturbed, until by quiet sobs disturbed. He stops and turns, then looks to see, a child's ball caught in a tree! A simple task to get it down, and ease the child's mournful frown. By grace of stature, he'd easily gain, for the tiny hand that reached in vain. Once the ball had been retrieved, the child's woes were fast relieved, and off she ran so full of glee, to join her waiting family. The Tinman watched with thoughtful eyes, as if this scene he'd recognized, then, from his eye, there came a tear, But Why?... For Joy?... or Love?... or Fear? That tear, the enigmatic thing, had set his mind to wandering, among those deepest thoughts revealed. the memories there to be concealed. until the, data reconciled, a life bereft of wife and child. He dare not think, He dare not speak, as tears streamed down his rusty cheek. He dare not let those tears impart, a throb within his broken heart, that beat within the iron shell, he forged within the fires of hell, the searing pain could not be quenched, lest from his very chest be wrenched. He must forget as best he can, the time when he was once a man. 'till darkness falls upon his mind, and leaves that shattered life behind..... ...And, where the soul of one man dies, Another Tinman will arise, to walk upon this pitiless earth, untouched by love,.... devoid of worth,... with nothing left but tasks to tend, until the path he walks will end. Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 MOONS WAVE! WHERE IS THE SMALL WAVE WON? LORD, FAITH! WHERE IS THE MISTY SUN? -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 6, 2008 Share Posted September 6, 2008 clouted by a dew pours from my watering can catching a rainbow Link to post Share on other sites
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