Green Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 Touche is Oldddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd I mean Olddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd really oldddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd Link to post Share on other sites
johan Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 I sometimes wish you'd think before you posted, KMT. Link to post Share on other sites
Nemo Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 KMT thinks with his balls It seems he's nuts Being such a klutz Whether left or right he appalls Link to post Share on other sites
Storyrider Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 While it seems he has just one dimension, The truth is, KMT craves attention. Not so dumb as he looks He even reads books Though their titles are too rude to mention. Link to post Share on other sites
Nemo Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 Story said it so right I think KMT is actually quite bright Well, let's just say I continue to pray That his testicles will learn how to write Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 21, 2008 Share Posted September 21, 2008 she is more than a number what little meaning is her age she can funny or humerous or wise like a sage or wise like a smart ass but that is part of her charm though she much bark she never means any harm you can flat out mock her just like KMT did she take it as well as dish it out will there be an infraction? heaven forbid! touche shouldn't change and has many friends among her she doesn't need to get nicer or prettier and at the very least any younger Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 22, 2008 Share Posted September 22, 2008 how is one to know when they are inflicted when a symptom is being unaware others can tell but the victim is blind to the sickness i wish it was an excuse at least that is some control you can leave the shades up it's a dark room either way which is comforting either way its not as if the past held better days at least something will always be familiar soon it will take over the transformation awaits how much longer, who knows? some days, it can't come soon enough a tunnel with no light is no longer a tunnel i'm sure others can't help but smile -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 muscles tighten and sweat builds exercise is paying off i try to push out the blackness deep within the burning pain is my punishment a solid shell with a rotten core but now hardened both outside and in Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Fury is a blazing cougar prowling through the night low to the ground lost the high reeds of the wilderness scattering in pure panic Link to post Share on other sites
Storyrider Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 muscles tighten and sweat builds exercise is paying off i try to push out the blackness deep within the burning pain is my punishment a solid shell with a rotten core but now hardened both outside and in Try eating more fiber. Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 It's LOSE not 'loose' It's FREE not 'for free' Just making these two corrections would make me happy Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Try eating more fiber. as bad as this month has been and its my words you defile i have to admit that really made me smile Link to post Share on other sites
Nemo Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Try eating more fiber. :lmao: Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Where is the purpose of this poem lie? The answer is not far Wild sentences? Things said randomly? Are you getting it? Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Gone is the subtley With what is written, it's obvious The purpose of what is written is becoming clear Wind, Earth, Fire, Water? Only Wind applies Link to post Share on other sites
Storyrider Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Gone is the subtley With what is written, it's obvious The purpose of what is written is becoming clear Wind, Earth, Fire, Water? Only Wind applies Maybe not beans though... Link to post Share on other sites
Touche Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Why do people lie? Why do they pretend? In how many positions are you willing to bend? You know he'll cheat. You know he'll lie. But ask yourself why you can't leave. Why do you want to cleave? Something inside tells you you don't deserve the best It's not a place you'll go...not your quest I pray I'm wrong Wish I could sing a different song Stop wasting time Soon you won't be in your prime Get real You haven't invented the wheel Pretend you're not for him Pretend he's not for you Pretend that you really deserve the best. Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 The last two poems I wrote have something extra Lord knows Of course its not that hard The game applies to this one too Flies, it may attract because this poem stinks Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Adventures are desired by many Of many types and challenges Huckleberry Hound knew this Finn is a word that makes no sense for this poem Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 The last four poems Lord knows Of course it's getting easier The game applies to this one as well Rings, not flies this time. Thus it works Link to post Share on other sites
Storyrider Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Yawn. Maurice Sendak, Margaret Mitchell, Mark Twain, William Golding. Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 I discovered Spine Poems and thought they were fun it bored storyrider but she was the bright one you take the title of a book and make each word the start of a line of poem you don't have to be that smart i got someting else in store for another day and hopefully story won't yawn or call them gay Link to post Share on other sites
Storyrider Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 I discovered Spine Poems and thought they were fun it bored storyrider but she was the bright one you take the title of a book and make each word the start of a line of poem you don't have to be that smart i got someting else in store for another day and hopefully story won't yawn or call them gay I'm just kidding it was fun Can't think of a rhyme And I have a bad cough Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 I'm just kidding it was fun Can't think of a rhyme And I have a bad cough no apology necessary thick skin i have i hope for your cough you obtain a salve Link to post Share on other sites
Storyrider Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 Today I started Obsessing about writing A witty Haiku Link to post Share on other sites
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