LikeTheWolf Posted July 11, 2008 Share Posted July 11, 2008 lovely bird! you must have good tone! my second guess is... a xylophone? and third because i thought of another one could it ever be an accordion? Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 so hesitant to write why can't I start? am I scared of success? or maybe just failure it's all in my head yet I can't put it down i know if i start it will be ok why can't i start? i gotta do it i gotta do it it needs to be written or does it? maybe its because once i see it created it may not be that good... -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 i do not feel the urge visit your graves i'm sorry father i'm sorry friend but you are no longer here i believe your soul has left and you do not remain six feet under in the soil i pray you are somewhere else i miss you terribly of course i do yet while others pay their respects it does nothing for me but it's not about me is it? is it? am i horrible? am i a beast? would i want others to visit me? i would hope i would be gone by then see my point? -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 and she has this Jar Of Life buried deep in her friends yard keep it secret keep it safe she may not be back to put more in it and she knows the risk she doesn't have to do what she does but that is just the type of person she is she almost got caught today but she saved the life of another child and thus has a new name to enter in her Jar Of Life full of names full of tragedy most those children won't ever see their parents again already dead... but they live thanks to her thanks to her is there a greater hero? -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 i never met you i just found out about you today you may be the most incredible person i discovered i honestly don't know what to say few stories have such an effect me i can't believe i never heard of your past such character, such virtue i rarely seen bravery surpassed Irena, when I think of what you've done i can't help but be deeply moved your actions make me feel, without measure good overcomes to me you proved what hurts me most is how horrible man can be i think if it was my children inside i weep thank God such a person as you existed i will pray for you before i sleep maybe i think too much how horrible the hearts of men can blacken and i picture my current children now what if them? My daughter? My son? i could not imagine a parent handing them over in hopes they would live and be back what must the child think to be smuggled in a coffin, a box, a sack? no child should live such horror to have memories of being so scared, taken so far hidden from murderous, ignorant adults that would kill them for simply what they are i imagine being you, standing in line your friends executed, every other person you must have seen the bodies fall things failed to get better, only worsen yourself so close to death defiant to the very end you never buckled or gave up when tortured your life you were willing to spend when i read the history of life as it was i think of how we have it now i never less grateful than the present we must love our children as much as life will allow why do i break my own heart for no reason? all it does it make me sad is it simply self torture or am i telling myself i am not so bad. your Life In A Jar I will never forget and i write this now in hopes others may learn what an incredible person you are in my heart your story will forever burn Irena Sendler. Irena Sendlerowa. People should know it. I will never forget it. I have link to anyone who asks... -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
Lovelybird Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 i really don't know what to guess is it a keyboard you possess? You are smart can figure that out Only keyboard has a pedal as well? Anyway, wish you all a good day Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 i wish it was a harpsichord it makes such an elegant sound its great to play the music of the lord Link to post Share on other sites
Lovelybird Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 It is ! I love sister Joyce Meyer's preaching Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 'your story was not right for us' a second rejection in such a short time a sinking feeling pulls deep inside 'strong conflict' 'strong characterization' 'sensuality' 'uplifting ending' I had all but one... 'Readers want fun and excitement' 'with a dash of sophistication' I had one of the two... it's not a defeat but a challenge to give them what they want yet still be unique i will not change refuse too i will give them won't they don't want but it won't appear that way the secret will be between the lines an uplifting ending? let it be so! happiness and excitement on the outside that will be the sugar coating of a core so rotten, so disgusting only the 'sophisticated' will see it and if they don't... oh what personal ploy! I love a challenge -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 personal ploy? how do I fool myself this way? I will do what i stated before a beautiful treat with a rotten core... however, the truth i believe to write such a story with fun, excitement, and upbeat ending I don't know if it's in me what is wrong? -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 if you want a diamond and I know you must first you take your lifetime of fragrant stagnant dust daily crush and pulverize the pile of sad dry heat then with hot tears moisten your bitter and your sweet step back allow to settle under steamy foggy years relax into paralysis waiting watching fear as wise silent gravity pushes back into your core under the crusty surface forms a gem that we'll adore (just a few keystrokes more it will be done race not yet run) Link to post Share on other sites
annieo Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 lucky me I am renewed vibrating in my solitude moist fantasies are in my head and in my bed messy lewd a face and mind stir up notions of making noise fermenting potions of scented lust all that ensues I give consent you cannot use that which is offered upon a platter of frankly adoring flesh Link to post Share on other sites
Lovelybird Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 I was mad at God Why did you give me this cup that I didn't want to drink? I could not move forward, could not go back Stuck Lingering around a dark place Couldn't see a road out I was mad at God "You won't give me a stone when I asked you a diamond, do you?" "No, I will give you what are beyond your expectations. we are in this together. Remember the promises I made to you? That a man will try his best to love you and know how to love you?" "Yes, I remember. You made that clear to me several times. But what if I love him too much that I idolize him what if he cheats on me what if he leave me and go for another woman what if...." "no what ifs, just remember my promises. I won't give you a stone instead of diamonds. I called you to love" Link to post Share on other sites
Lovelybird Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 If I can write I will write something real something communicate my heart my integrity something follow my heart my purpose my passion If I can write Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 if I lie in the Sun will it burn away my sins? i want my hatred and jealousy to be charred as well let it burn through my flesh and boil my soul i want it to be clean and i don't care how much it hurts because it can't be as bad as this burn me burn me burn me -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 when i lie to sleep at night and the lights are off and its dark outside i like to feel small to be away from it all so i imagine my size compared to the room and that's where i start how much bigger the room is compared to me then i step out further and picture the size of the house and how much bigger the house is compared to my room then i step out further and picture the size of the block and how much bigger the block is compared to my house then i step out further and picture my block to the town then my town to the city then my city to the state then my state to the country then my country to the planet then my planet to the solar system then my solar system to the milky way then the milky way to all the cosmos compared to me so small... and then i can sleep -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
Lovelybird Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 I saw a man Not sure in my dreams or reality In a heavy fog, I saw him He was engraved in my heart He loves Lord more than himself He loves souls more than himself He was brave when facing challenges He adhered to the truth when persecution came He put confidence in Lord and genuinely Love others He wasn't perfect He made mistakes but one thing for sure He loved Lord more than anything I fell in love with him seeing we stand in same living river I understood him, and he understood me Through heavy fog, will I find him again? Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 bitter day your taste still on my lips i missed retribution is key -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
Trialbyfire Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 Owed to a Workout I touched your hair I wish I hadn't Please have a shower Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 i want to find every hair on your body i just do -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
Trialbyfire Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 Romance doesn't begin at the base of a hair follicle It seeds in the heart And is nurtured from the soul. Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 you may have much to learn or maybe much to teach isn't love different for everyone? do you practice what you preach? -ltw Link to post Share on other sites
Trialbyfire Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 I have neither heart or soul Those who can love, do Those who cannot love, teach and preach. Link to post Share on other sites
LikeTheWolf Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 i had a soul but i let it become so dark it faded into the night or i lost it in the shadows i know not where... my heart was stolen and even though discarded i never picked it back up i cannot teach and i dare not preach let others suffer as i for there, i believe, is the only true knowledge everything else is ignorant bliss Link to post Share on other sites
Trialbyfire Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 My heart I had for dinner My soul for dessert What should I have for a snack? Link to post Share on other sites
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