Outcast Posted November 20, 2003 Share Posted November 20, 2003 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The ache still burns in me (while you, unfeeling, enjoy your bliss) the spot where our dream lived is empty and I am bereft what happened to my good fortune? plunged again into loss and loneliness (and you, unfeeling enjoy your bliss) GJRMTB '99 Link to post Share on other sites
Tony T Posted November 20, 2003 Share Posted November 20, 2003 Most often, loss is seen as great fortune further down the road. Aches are never forever. Link to post Share on other sites
Goatsbreath Posted November 24, 2003 Share Posted November 24, 2003 It was only a tear that ran softly down her cheek trailing with it her grief and sorrow as if to hold this pain in a world of its own slolwy- leaving this narrowing impression of thoughts and feelings a empty tear approached the edge... ................ and fell into the nothingness from which it evolved (me) Link to post Share on other sites
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