dobroj Posted February 24, 2012 Posted February 24, 2012 things are goin ok between us but for for some reason i have these little jingles or phrases that pop into my head when i think about her. and it has happened alot i now have 6 poems about her and growing. When i think about it i just have to write it down to get it off my mind. Its weird because i use to hate poetry and now it flows out of me with little to no thought. i recently made one from valentines day i was going to put with her gift i gave her but it wasn't finished yet and i didnt have enough time to get it on a card. i don't know whether to ever show her these and maybe she sees what she means to me or if i do it would scare her and think I'm gay or weird. she is very understanding but i dont know if i should just keep this to myself or share it. any thoughts?
Star Gazer Posted February 24, 2012 Posted February 24, 2012 Depends on the girl and how she feels about the particular guy. My SO speaks poetry to me in different languages and then translates it for me. I LOVE IT. Guys before him that tried any level of mush or romance almost made me gag. But with him, I just gush.
Ninjainpajamas Posted February 24, 2012 Posted February 24, 2012 It depends on age and the type of person really. I think poetry is something you have to have a taste or interest in. If you're on the younger side, then she might get a kick out of it...or If she's the type to be into romantic and fantasy crap like the Twilight ****. But even then there's a fine line, because it really depends on how she feels about you. Bottom line for me is it's probably a safer bet to just express how you feel first, maybe without the poetry, then If you really feel the desire to then you can lead up to it. With women It's usually on how things are done, not just what is done...it has to be sincere, meaningful, genuine. If you guys were really having a strong connection and the chemistry was crazy then I'd say go for it, but you sound on the young side and honestly whatever you do in that doesn't really matter because It's a learning experience...so I might just say hell go for it, plus If you feel It's that big of a part of you then go for it, take the chance...part of being a man is believing in yourself (imo)
anne1707 Posted February 24, 2012 Posted February 24, 2012 Now if my Wuggle were to say I wonder, by my troth, what thou and I Did, till we lov'd? Were we not wean'd till then? ..... :love::love:
reallyhotguy Posted February 24, 2012 Posted February 24, 2012 je suis un tres hot guy et tu es une tres hot femme donc nous allons aller a la discotheque et manger des baguettes et fromage et ton chat si tu sais ce que je veux dire parce que je t'adore There you go man, I wrote you a poem that is guaranteed to work. I mean I haven't used it personally, mostly because I wrote it just now, but here we have feedback from Star Gazer which clearly demonstrates that girls like foreign poems, so I used my French skills (4 yrs high school) and my natural gift for artistry to compose you a piece that I am sure she will like. You can probably use your own poetry as well, it's all good but just don't open with it, because being real here it's probably not on this level. And hey don't worry about attribution man, this is my gift to you, plus this poem is unenforceable public domain stuff now that I posted it here, so it's not like anyone's gonna litigate if she starts to suspect that you didn't write it because you probably don't know French like I do. Plus there's some plausibility here, I mean you're a really hot guy too, right? Good luck and let me know how it goes. 1
reallyhotguy Posted February 24, 2012 Posted February 24, 2012 Here's a poem for you to give her, you can say you wrote it: Roses are red Violets are blue I just bought you dinner Now can we please go screw? OP, don't quote this charlatan. You'll definitely want to use my poem.
FrustratedStandards Posted February 24, 2012 Posted February 24, 2012 A poem is sweet if it's good, and really awkward if it's bad lol
Author dobroj Posted February 25, 2012 Author Posted February 25, 2012 we met last summer. things have been like a roller coaster for us for a while. we recently started talking again. and hanging out more. i have alot of fun with her. ive opened up to her before and just spilled everything because i couldnt take holding in how i felt any more. i just openly sed "if you havnt noticed im deathly shy, and at this time i dont know what to say or how to say it so im just gonna tell you exactly how i feel. i told her that i have alot of fun with her and that when im with her it feels great being near her. how I can never get her off my mind and i keep having these thoughts of us that may never be real. she told me to not think like that. she understands how i feel but at this point it still seems pretty neutral. she didn't say its a no but it seems she isnt sure what she feels at the moment. i wasn't sure what i thought of valentines day. and eventually i just saw it as a moment to let her know she is someone who matters to me. It was an opportunity that was closing fast so i jumped for it and hoped for the best. i got an "awe" and a smile from the valentine i gave her so i feel it was good to go through with it after all. sadly i wasnt able to give it to her in person but i hope when i see her next time i can talk to her and hopefully things go good
veggirl Posted February 25, 2012 Posted February 25, 2012 Is she even your gf? It sounds a bit too soon for poetry. I'm not into poetry. I'd be...I don't know exactly. I'd be flattered, but I'd feel uncomfortable. I'm probably in the minority, lots of girls would LOVE it. I'm not romantic
somedude81 Posted February 25, 2012 Posted February 25, 2012 Roses are red Charmander is too Don't worry baby, I choose you! ---- Gotta catch 'em all!
reallyhotguy Posted February 25, 2012 Posted February 25, 2012 Is she even your gf? It sounds a bit too soon for poetry. I'm not into poetry. I'd be...I don't know exactly. I'd be flattered, but I'd feel uncomfortable. I'm probably in the minority, lots of girls would LOVE it. I'm not romantic I think you just haven't yet received the right poem. Don't worry veggirl, I've written that poem for you: Ode to Veggirl ______________________________ Gently, she grasps the long and slender stalk of celery Coyly, I watch her touch green against red lips CRUNCH She bit the celery, Christ, that really ruined it for me 4
veggirl Posted February 25, 2012 Posted February 25, 2012 I think you just haven't yet received the right poem. Don't worry veggirl, I've written that poem for you: Ode to Veggirl ______________________________ Gently, she grasps the long and slender stalk of celery Coyly, I watch her touch green against red lips CRUNCH She bit the celery, Christ, that really ruined it for me :lmao::lmao: I've been converted. Thanks guy! 1
Mme. Chaucer Posted February 25, 2012 Posted February 25, 2012 Would you like to submit some of your poems for critique? 1
kaylan Posted February 26, 2012 Posted February 26, 2012 I write song lyrics, if that counts as poetry. I usually write some lyrics out...thoughts and feelings...and then I read the lyrics over at a later time and create a bass line and/or melody.
ThaWholigan Posted February 26, 2012 Posted February 26, 2012 I wrote poems+rap verses for years as a way of dealing with speech therapy. It's only weird if you do it when she isn't attracted to you. If she likes you, she will absolutely love your poetry. I've yet to properly write a song for a girl.......well, I've written one, but nobody has heard it. I liked to compose piano pieces about girls I liked though, every note, in a particular key, and each chord progression and trill would describe her physical essence. It's one of those weird things about me that I don't really tell anybody about
Author dobroj Posted February 26, 2012 Author Posted February 26, 2012 i really like her and went ahead and showed her them. she ddnt say alot just wandered how long it took me because most were really long. The only reason i showed her tho was a little awkward. this is going to sound weird to some of you but the age difference is im 18 shes 15 i know that sounds wrong but know i have intentions of trying something stupid. The thing that made me show her was when she shared with me she had already had sex with someone who was her own age. and i thought while were just putting everything out in the open now was as good of a time as any. How she could just straight up tell me that surprised me. and she asked if i felt any different about her. I honestly don't.shes still the same person i hope to get to know more and im not calling her a slut or anything i could never do that. but but i am worried. The way she said it to do it and just get it over with was sad to me it should be something special and meaningful not just to do it and have no meaning with the person your with. she told me to promise that i wouldn't tell anyone. I wish she wouldnt have told me. im scared now. i know i want to keep her trust and not say anything but im going to talk to her sometime i don't know what it will mean im going to ask her if she could promise me she wont do it again. i dont know how i can ask someone to do that i just want to see her do something with her life and destroy it all because of one regrettable night. if something would happen i would feel at fault because i knew it was happening and i could have made an effort to put a stop to it but i didnt. I dont want that guilt or regret knowing i could have saved her from doing something wrong. im going to talk to her as a friend and try to truly understand. a while ago we once taked about how it would be best to wait until marriage and we seemed to see that as the best option in any scenario. then to do this. i dont know what to think. im scared for her and know saying something would be the right thing but i dont want to break her trust.....God help me make this decision i dont know what is the right decision but give me the strength to decide now and not regret it later
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