velazcuaraim Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Hi, my gf broke up with me about 2 weeks ago. And we haven't talk since. But I really miss her. And the other day I heard this Spanish song that describes almost exactly how I feel. So I translated and change some little things to made it a little more similar to my situation. I'm thinking to write it down and send her a letter. But I want to post it here first for 2 reasons. 1st, my English is not the best one and I want to be sure that I don't have to many mistakes or non senses in my letter (if you find some please let me know) 2nd, I need your opinion if I should send it or not. this is my history of how things ended. http://www.loveshack.org/forums/showthread.php?threadid=45193 Thanks I don’t know if you… But I can’t stop to think, Not even a minute I can stop to think, In all your affections, all your hugs And all the good times we had. I don’t know if you… But I will like to repeat The exhaustion that you caused With the nights that you gave me And those moments that with your affections you built I don’t know if you… But I have begun to miss you Within people, my friends, On the streets, without witnesses And in my pillow I can’t stop to think I don’t know if you… But I look for you in every dawn My desires I can’t contain In the nights when I sleep Without insomnia I am sick I miss you, I need you I don’t know if you……. Link to post Share on other sites
Bubbles Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 How about rather than "I don't know if you..." you could say "I don't know about you......." I think that would make much more sence. Only my opionion. If this is REALLY the way you feel, then yes send it to her. Do not be falce....she will know it. Bubbles Link to post Share on other sites
crazydawg Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Save your pride man, I lost all of it today. I confessed the love i had and it went through one ear out to the other. Nothings going to change by u sending this if anything she'll respect u more if u dont Link to post Share on other sites
Pocky Posted August 23, 2004 Share Posted August 23, 2004 Save your pride man, I lost all of it today. I confessed the love i had and it went through one ear out to the other. Nothings going to change by u sending this if anything she'll respect u more if u dont Keep your pessimism for your own issues. I'm so tired of people coming on here saying that things didn't work for them so someone else shouldn't take a chance. Love is beautiful. Stop treating it like the biggest mistake in the world when what you love doesn't love you the same way. Talk about being so freaking selfish! Send it to her and enjoy the feeling you get when you realize that you love someone. Link to post Share on other sites
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