poor poetry ahead. if you dont like poetry to begin with, skip this thread.

[R1PPED]

i wrote this poem about a year ago for a girl that i messed up with. i never gave it to her and i was wondering what anyone thinks about it. in my opinion its pretty sappy but i was wondering if i might be able to use it for future reference in the likely situation that i make another mistake.

 

Only One Chance

 

I walk up behind you,

It’s a beautiful night.

It’s only us two,

It’s love at first sight.

 

We sit on the beach,

We look eye to eye.

For a kiss I beseech,

I’m ready to die.

 

I wait for the look,

I see your bright smile.

I'll be wishing I took

That kiss for a while.

 

Now that you’re gone,

I have ants in my pants.

I’m asking you for

this one final chance.

[tokyo]

That´s cute, I find it so boring reading poems, I don´t know why, but it´s so great when someone knows how to recite a poem and does it with the right emphasis on the right places. I love that. Awww, I really get weak when someone recites a poem for me That is so romantic. I think I will put that on my list of "must haves"