Nyclovin Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 You handed me the world then you snatched it away. Without a second thought you turned the sun into rain. The warmth into cold. My young face has gotten old. You took what was my joy and made it pain. Selfishly, you craved what you could never regain. You sacrificed me to the wolves and now they eat my flesh. You tossed me to the side and now a clear path awaits. Without hesitation you made your bed,and now you lay, without me by your side, alone as you came, naked in the rain. Awake with no one to blame. Yourself and your actions. Years wasted. What a shame. You did it for us, or so you claim. You taught me how to laugh, now I know what it means to cry. You showed me how to enjoy life, now I know what it feels like to die. You made me see the beauty in the world then had the nerve to cover my eyes. You opened my heart and showed me how to love. Never give in, you taught me to always try. For years I have given my everything to you. Now hate covers it up. Now my blood has run dry. Nothing was enough . You brought me to new heights. Pleasure of the immortal type. You showed kindness and compassion and now only cruelty resides. You made me confident in myself. Believe in our lives. Now shattered dreams lay in pieces and you don't offer to help clean up inside. Building a future to last . All you do is ignore the temptation, that for one second, you gave up too damn fast. Your loss. My loss. Nobody cares. Everyone stares. Watches the crash in a fiery ball of tears. You came into my life. An uninvited surprise. You shared with me your soul and in turn I gave you mine. You pursued me until I caved. Now you pushed me over the line. Far away from you now. A stranger if the filthiest kind. And in time, I hope you regret it. I pray that the next one makes you as sick as I feel. As unhappy as I am. As miserable as you made me. Yes, I wish you only the worst, never the best. For that is what you have done to me. Left me to hurt, alone, with no way to sleep. Karma, the ultimate test. Put forth the energy and when it revisits you, you will feel its last laugh. 4 Link to post Share on other sites
2fargone Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 Seek help... 2 Link to post Share on other sites
Insanityisdoingsame Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 Seek help... Rude..your the one who needs help. To the OP i thought it was brilliant. May karma make our ex"s lives a living hell for all the pain they hAve caused us. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
AlphaC Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 Rude..your the one who needs help. To the OP i thought it was brilliant. May karma make our ex"s lives a living hell for all the pain they hAve caused us. I agree with 2fargone, this guy needs help and you do too. The most troubling part of his post is where he writes "you pursued me until I caved." Men don't cave, that's probably why the ex left him. No masculine traits. Oh and before I forget, OP, rule #24 subsection J - states as follows "don't wish bad on your ex, wish something better for yourself." Learn and grow from this failed relationship of yours. View it as a lesson learned!!!!!! And finally, I don't think anyone appreciates your spreading of negativity on this site, I know I don't, so cheer up, have a happy new year. 3 Link to post Share on other sites
pickflicker Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 Hi, People are not bad because they dump us. They're bad if they continue to stay with us and and make us live an inauthentic life based on faked feelings and lies. Just something to think about. 4 Link to post Share on other sites
PPamgirl Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 (edited) i hope karma gets my jerk ex !!! and kick him in the balls for be such a dick ! and liar and impulsive and not treated me right and even after all he did it to me i was able to be kind offered my help coz of my lost love for him ! i hope he meets many bitches who treat him horribly and use him until death and make him feel like a toy ! stupid liar ! GRRR i hate him so badddd !!! Edited December 28, 2013 by PPamgirl Link to post Share on other sites
SilverlinedCloud Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 Just my 2 cents. I think it was a beautifully written set of verses Nd everyone should be entitled to express their hurt without scrutiny. I don't think it's up to us to wish or decide when where or how karma will "get" our exes. Hell, I don't even think karma exists in the way we portray it. Allow the powers that be to take care of your ex, whether it be for better or for worse isn't something we should affirm because then we focus all of our power in being an eye for an eye n then suddenly you know no way better or out of the emotional torment. I tried to make contact with my ex on Christmas Day, after a long stretch of no contact and I came to realize he's doing better than he was, now dating and what not. At first I was angry and then I refused to make misery my company because he did what exactly I should have been doing instead of obsessing on him. Just. Let. Go. You may not be ready to as its one of the easiest yet one of the hardest things to do. But once you realize there is nothing to hold onto and by electing to hold onto the heartbreak, they aren't doing it to us but us to ourselves. That's like our own karma. Dumper or dumpee the key thing we have to now assume is patience. Patience for ourselves and believing that not someone is round the corner, but that you can deal with your emotions healthily.. Have a good day when needed and feel out the bad day too I hope OP and anyone else your days get better! Link to post Share on other sites
StringsAttached Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 I thought it was great. Why can't he vent about his ex on a relationship-advice forum? As for the person who said those aren't manly traits - who knows what this guy has been through he's probably been through hell and back like me and that doesn't make him a beta. Perhaps this was the girl he thought was the one...perhaps his ex really did hurt him. People can be so judgemental and harsh to cover up their own insecurities. Keep doing what you do. Poetry is a great self release i've found. 3 Link to post Share on other sites
livingnightmare Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 I know exactly where you are coming from OP I still get it if I ponder over things, I try my hardest not too as I know its just a form of holding on I guess deep down? Then I suffer guilt because she is still my daughters mother. Thought it was a great expression of feelings. I relate to them. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
LiliesNoLilies Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 It's an eloquent text and spot on in expressing the storm of emotion we feel at one stage or another. Now, karma might do its job, or it might not. Hopefully in positive ways rather than destructive. Hopefully it will bring bright things for you after all this hurt. But bitterness and hostility attracts bad karma, in the end. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
lollipopspot Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 You taught me how to laugh... You showed me how to enjoy life... You made me see the beauty in the world... You opened my heart and showed me how to love. Never give in, you taught me to always try... You brought me to new heights. Pleasure of the immortal type. You showed kindness and compassion... You made me confident in myself... You shared with me your soul and in turn I gave you mine. It sounds like you got quite a few gifts from this person. It might be better for you to look at these great things (that some people never get) and see how you can keep them in your life, rather than attaching them to her and thinking that if she goes that it's all gone. There's something about your post that's disturbing: it's as though you view her as an all-powerful parent and you're a child. As though she can bring laughter and and joy and beauty and then take everything away from you and you're helpless. As though she has to spend the rest of her life being with you or you'll be deprived of these things. Sometimes, it's right that people move on, for their own growth. If she did it cruelly then that's a shame, but it might help to look at the possibly co-dependent nature of your relationship. 1 Link to post Share on other sites
xUnknown Posted December 29, 2013 Share Posted December 29, 2013 I thought this was a great read. Screw the haters. My only criticism is the line now I know what it feels like to die. But still, I liked it. Way to go OP. Vent on. Link to post Share on other sites
Insanityisdoingsame Posted December 29, 2013 Share Posted December 29, 2013 I thought this was a great read. Screw the haters. My only criticism is the line But still, I liked it. Way to go OP. Vent on. Haters gonna hate Link to post Share on other sites
Reels Posted December 30, 2013 Share Posted December 30, 2013 And she will reincarnate into worse life as well.. No jokes. Link to post Share on other sites
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