blackendangel13 Posted April 12, 2005 Share Posted April 12, 2005 Hi all, I just wanted to share a poem I wrote about those of us who wanted second chances and had to settle for "just friends". Hope you like it. ~Satisfied~ Thinking back on me when things used to be so much easier and took much less time to explain the way everything crumbled I used to love I used to care about more than just myself and everything you took away that used to hold me When everything fades and I am left with nothing but my memories to keep me sane they provide little comfort on days when I can't forget you I will never be satisfied with the sideways glances and all the times you say you're sorry for the way you ripped my world apart forcing me to settle with your friendship Friendship that ways so heavily on me that I cannot get out from under your thumb holding me where I will always be trying to pick myself up off the sand as the grains slip through my hand And I will never be satisfied with what you are willing to give me and I will never be satisfied with what you wanted us to be Link to post Share on other sites
Vampiress Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 nice very nice Link to post Share on other sites
westernxer Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 part deux take me back love i lack you will see I won't be just the same nothing said lie in bed hope for change out of range who's to blame take my hand understand you and me one, two, three end of game now I say sans delay what a fool love is cruel crying shame Link to post Share on other sites
alphamale Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by blackendangel13 Friendship that ways so heavily on me that should be "weighs", not "ways" the rest of the composition gets a B- Link to post Share on other sites
ConfusedInOC Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by westernxer part deux take me back love i lack you will see I won't be just the same nothing said lie in bed hope for change out of range who's to blame take my hand understand you and me one, two, three end of game now I say sans delay what a fool love is cruel crying shame Take a bow, dude Link to post Share on other sites
westernxer Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 (bows to the captive audience) Link to post Share on other sites
alphamale Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by westernxer (bows to the captive audience) *klap* *klap* Link to post Share on other sites
XNemesisX Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Hmm I'm not too into the poetry. I would rather express my emotions through cursing really loud while I'm driving down the road so no one can hear me or beating up a stuffed animal. Anger is a much better emotion. Link to post Share on other sites
ConfusedInOC Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by XNemesisX Hmm I'm not too into the poetry. I would rather express my emotions through cursing really loud while I'm driving down the road so no one can hear me or beating up a stuffed animal. Anger is a much better emotion. You own a punching bag, I assume? Link to post Share on other sites
alphamale Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 oh, my heart aches for thee but by you friends we shall only be must it be so that my soul be left in the cold while you are with him living a life of pain and sin I, being much too nice cannot steal you away from your vice Copyrighted 2005 by alphamale. Any duplication in any form whatsoever is prohibited. Link to post Share on other sites
westernxer Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Poetry, to me, is cathartic. Plus it's fun to write (sometimes). Link to post Share on other sites
westernxer Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Alpha, I give you an A for Alpha. Link to post Share on other sites
alphamale Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by westernxer Alpha, I give you an A for Alpha. thx WESTERNXER, i just made that up. took me 5 minutes. Link to post Share on other sites
ConfusedInOC Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by alphamale oh, my heart aches for thee but by you friend we shall only be must it be so that my soul be left in the cold while you are with him living a life of pain and sin I, being much too nice cannot steal you away from your vice Copyrighted 2005 by alphamale. Any duplication in any form whatsoever is prohibited. Not bad, Alpha. I'll give 'er a go Be friends I say It must be this way For what you don't see Is you can not be with me So while you lie in sorrow I'll forget you in the 'morrow And while I begin anew You'll just sit there and stew You say it sucks to be taken for granted Should have seen this love was slanted But as with all things in time A love replaced is no crime Be my friend, and stay close I'll call you when I need you the most And like a marionette on a string You'll be there when I need a fling Link to post Share on other sites
westernxer Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Bravo, man. Bravo. I'm interesting in seeing how one writes a poem after dropping acid... I'm not volunteering, though. Link to post Share on other sites
ConfusedInOC Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by westernxer Bravo, man. Bravo. I'm interesting in seeing how one writes a poem after dropping acid... I'm not volunteering, though. Thanks. I've only done acid once and it was enough to scare me off drugs completely. That was when I was 18. Link to post Share on other sites
alphamale Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by ConfusedInOC Be my friend, and stay close I'll call you when I need you the most And like a marionette on a string You'll be there when I need a fling Link to post Share on other sites
ConfusedInOC Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Originally posted by alphamale Isn't that why they want to stay friends?! LOL If the sex was great, they'll certainly keep you around for FWB.... Link to post Share on other sites
XNemesisX Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 You own a punching bag, I assume? Nope, just some poor stuffed animals that get beat up from time to time! I'm interesting in seeing how one writes a poem after dropping acid... I'm not volunteering, though. LOL now there's a thought! Whoa this is way off topic but I thought about doing that until my friend told me that when she looked in the mirror she saw her face turn into something that looked like that man in that painting called "scream" Link to post Share on other sites
westernxer Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 The painting that was stolen? That's a good way to describe an acid trip. Link to post Share on other sites
whichwayisup Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Copyrighted 2005 by alphamale. Any duplication in any form whatsoever is prohibited. Originally posted by ConfusedInOC Be my friend, and stay close I'll call you when I need you the most And like a marionette on a string You'll be there when I need a fling That's funny too! Link to post Share on other sites
ConfusedInOC Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 Originally posted by whichwayisup That's funny too! Should I copyright it? Ok, Copyright 2005, ConfusedInOC Link to post Share on other sites
SCATTERJOY Posted May 5, 2005 Share Posted May 5, 2005 Be friends I say It must be this way For what you don't see Is you can not be with me So while you lie in sorrow I'll forget you in the 'morrow And while I begin anew You'll just sit there and stew You say it sucks to be taken for granted Should have seen this love was slanted But as with all things in time A love replaced is no crime Be my friend, and stay close I'll call you when I need you the most And like a marionette on a string You'll be there when I need a fling[/i] That is just harsh but a lesson I think I need to hear right about now. Also, that whole let them walk thing is a really good way to look at it. I never thought about that before. I think you just made my day easier and I will never be answering any phone calls from that guy again. Time to move on. Thanks Link to post Share on other sites
eastern_mystique Posted May 13, 2005 Share Posted May 13, 2005 Here's a short one I came up with: "At least I can say I loved and lost - You just lusted and forgot." Link to post Share on other sites
ConfusedInOC Posted May 13, 2005 Share Posted May 13, 2005 Originally posted by SCATTERJOY That is just harsh but a lesson I think I need to hear right about now. Also, that whole let them walk thing is a really good way to look at it. I never thought about that before. I think you just made my day easier and I will never be answering any phone calls from that guy again. Time to move on. Thanks I can't take credit for it. It was passed on to me and I felt that the information was poignant enough to be left in my siggy. Stick to NO CONTACT. Anyone who walks away from you doesn't deserve to be let back in your life. Link to post Share on other sites
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