Recently lost someone I loved, and made something. Thoughts?

[JustAnotherLostLove]

Greetings again,

 

So I'm new here, posted/responded a few times, and have told my story regarding the loss of a 3+ year relationship, that happened under 2 months ago. When it comes to*coping, I almost always put it in the form of song writing. It's with that in mind, that I have created something, that hopefully comes off as true, honest and relatable. I've showed this to a select few, mainly producers, but I would love the opinions of you guys, people who are going through it, and know the pain.

 

Please, give me your honest opinions. Hopefully this doesn't violate any terms by posting this. This place helps me a lot, and I don't want to be kicked off. Thank you.