inertia_creeps Posted May 27, 2006 Share Posted May 27, 2006 Hi, I found some of my writing back in the days when i first realised that i had some issues with drugs / booze and general lawless behaviour. If i recall correctly i was using alot of speed and E at the time, and it was before i really understood depression or anxiety (happy days eh?!) I am not saying they are great poems or anything, i just found it fascinating to see my mental state back then. What do you guys make of this? [FONT=Haettenschweiler]Into your space. Walking, To the end of a pier, Grey skies ahead and above, Electric sounds in my ear, Sea is beating at the jetty, spraying up onto my legs, The Grey goes electric, wind blowing hard. Seas part, walking in a microchip separation, Through two solid steal blocks, grooves like a circuit board, Cobalt floor, aluminum weather, wind blows my hair. Memories for a second, I used to love. Then they go, I carry on. Seas are solid, Metal curves and sculptures, Futures so fine can nearly touch it Mind is like a generator, A million memory’s a second, projecting images up onto the cold Grey skies, Wind blowing hard, fast tearing the buttons from my shirt, Middle of the pier. Beginning is ahead of me. Journeys almost over. Tears of acid roll, Onto my silicone skin, the red lights in my eyes focus. Human images. In my eyes. Child smiling, grandmother smiling. Inside there is a heart pounding, rippling the metal, Melting it, Away, away into the seas, The seas of my mind. The oceans of my brain. [/FONT] Link to post Share on other sites
Author inertia_creeps Posted June 4, 2006 Author Share Posted June 4, 2006 not alot then eh?! Ill remove this! thx for reading. Link to post Share on other sites
kitten chick Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 I think that people's writings can be very subjective and it can be viewed in many different ways. Perhaps this was a reflection of your desire to move to a more sober and less intrusive lifestyle? You would be able to tell us what it means from your own perspective better than we would. Either way it was a great poem. Link to post Share on other sites
Author inertia_creeps Posted June 5, 2006 Author Share Posted June 5, 2006 thanks and yes i think you are right. I found a load more today, i dont know whether to post them or not as i may seem completely mad! Link to post Share on other sites
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